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Monday, August 30, 2021

poem about maia poroaki


4 comments:

  1. Hi Tasman,
    I have just listened to you reading your Maia poem, great job. You have described his personality well, he certainly is not a kind and friendly character. You have put a lot of thought into your poem, well done.

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  2. Hi Tasmin, You Nailed Maia's personality, he really doesn't sound like a friendly person. I like how you used one of our values in your poem. Did you have fun writing this?

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  3. There was not much space to sit were it was quiet. because my sister was on her google meet and my dad was cooking but yes Megan it was fun writing this

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  4. What great writing Tasmin. I like how you have written your poem and then created a video to read it to us. What was the hardest part of writing this poem?

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